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A critique of the site:
Although your intent is worthy, the site does need to be fleshed out in two areas:
One, the descriptions for the individual readers need to be polished (it looks like you pulled text from other sites, and that caused some text errors that need to be fixed) and expanded upon.
Two, your addition of a "PDA" category doesn't really work here, as there are so many styles and formats of "PDA"... it is too generic a category. I'd suggest choosing a few PDAs in particular, or perhaps a PDA, a smartphone, and another device like the iPhone or an ultra-mobile PC (UMPC), and giving each their own category... or simply leave PDAs out.
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